Descriptive writing .

Jeff the lonely fox .

 In the gloomy woods there lived a lonely looking fox , his name was Jeff .He was not like other foxes he wanted to be a friendly fox , he did not want to be a loner he wanted to be a well known fox . But he couldn’t do that everyone knows that foxes are liars and sneaky animals , even though he knew that he went to find a friend . On that day he was foraging for friends when he heard squeak and yapping .When he went out to investigate ,what he appeared to see was a gang of animals .Jeff went up to the gang of animals and said “Hello there, can I be friends with you ,I am not like other foxes I am a honest and trustworthy”. But instead of say “come and be our new friend Jeff .” They suddenly began to burst out laughing, “We all know that you are a untrustworthy fox” Jeff the fox was in disgraced he was feeling horrible , then suddenly a mice came out of nowhere and said in a slowly squeaky voice I want to be your friend and they went playing in the paddock .

W.A.L.T. write a descriptive writing we read this book that this pony wanted to be a unicorn and it was based on a descriptive writing .