The man in the hut . As the man drifts off to sleep the creaking of footsteps came scared the him .Then a zap of energy zapped the man .The man’s eyelids opened to reveal the inside of the hut .
There he saw three men in the dark sky .In the light as he creeped to the door he thought about it then he went back to sleep .
W.A.L.T. write a show not tell writing it was really hard because you really cant tell the person in there mind .
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